Showing posts with label one true sentence. Show all posts
Showing posts with label one true sentence. Show all posts

Saturday, January 29, 2011

The Spectre of the Blank Computer Screen

It used to be the haunting white paper on the desk, waiting for the mark of a pen. Then it was the sheet rolled into the old Underwood typewriter. Some people advanced to the Selectric, and although I went straight to the computer, the blank "paper" still haunts me.

I scan through my mental Rolodex of ideas and experiences, but none seem worthy of fiction. I seach for an image--something I've seen--or a sound or a phrase--something that's landed on my ear--but the cream is not rising to the top.

Looking for inspiration, I pick up a YA novel from the pile of YA novels on my desk. Rebel Glory, by Sigmund Brouwer. I read the first three chapters. They're short. At the end of chapter 3, I'm still only on page 13. I'm trying to read like a reader who is a writer and notice things a writer might notice.

It's written in the first person. The narrator is Brian McPhee, a 17-year-old junior hockey player. Chapter 1 gives a description of an incident (I don't want to give it away!) at a hockey game. I notice a couple of great similes. The hockey coach, who "has a face that looks like it was carved from the side of a mountain" (7) lambastes his players, telling them they are "skating like ballerinas" (6). Brian describes his English teacher: "Mr. Palmer's eyes bulged out like a constipated frog's" (12).

This is off to a lively start. Okay, I'm inspired.

Now that I'm in the writing groove, I'd better get on to the real writing--an Assignment of Great Importance. Four pages of fiction. Double-spaced. That's about 1,200 words.

Breathe deep . . . write "one true sentence."